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so i DID rewrite that last scene i was talking about. i think it was the right choice. this one makes a lot more sense and it really draws a big line between the characters in a way that i couldn't in the other version. this one feels more comfortable, more personal, less dramatic, and it forces the characters to actually deal with a problem rather than just talk about it.

so that was good.

back to work.

(no subject)

so i DID rewrite that last scene i was talking about. i think it was the right choice. this one makes a lot more sense and it really draws a big line between the characters in a way that i couldn't in the other version. this one feels more comfortable, more personal, less dramatic, and it forces the characters to actually deal with a problem rather than just talk about it.

so that was good.

back to work.

(no subject)

so i DID rewrite that last scene i was talking about. i think it was the right choice. this one makes a lot more sense and it really draws a big line between the characters in a way that i couldn't in the other version. this one feels more comfortable, more personal, less dramatic, and it forces the characters to actually deal with a problem rather than just talk about it.

so that was good.

back to work.