I'm talking more about the entries where the entire crux of the entry was "this person was bad" or "this group of people are so stupid!" Where the overarching tone of the piece was negative. To me, for example, looking at your entry, one line saying your sister was whiny serves to ground the story in a realistic framework; you could have written an entire piece, using the same story, about how you appreciate the importance of history and your sister doesn't and that makes her an inferior human being, and then that would be the kind of thing I'm talking about.
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Date: 2010-11-15 05:34 pm (UTC)